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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Topic: Silver Snake
    Posted: 06 March 2008 at 3:18pm
So on a whim feeling quite Slytheriny, I decided to make a silver snakey sprite!

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Here it is on a white background for you guys: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v611/aleiav/Pixel/snakey3.gif
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It's loosely based on The Black Mamba yet silver, a little more thick and, obviously, much shorter.

I'm not sure how I feel about it right now. I like the shape but I'm feeling a little eeeeh about the color. Any suggestions? I'd really love a perfect little snakey for my signature. Lar suggested that the head's a bit too static... any suggestions on how to move it? Maybe facing more towards the audience?



Edited by Aleiav - 10 March 2008 at 12:26pm
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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 06 March 2008 at 3:38pm
I think his head looks static because the neck is almost straight up and down. Look at this pic. See how the neck is curved around? I think if you did that you would be better off.

The silver is too grey, I'd like to see some hueshifting, maybe some blues in there.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 06 March 2008 at 4:15pm
Yeah I see what you mean. I'll fix the snake head later but for now I've been messing around with the colors.



I did it with green. What do you think?

EDIT: Changed the snake head.

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More contrast in the one on the right.

EDIT 2:

Current version:




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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 06 March 2008 at 5:21pm
Your current edit had a lot of changes what I as going to address in this edit, but it may still be useful:
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 06 March 2008 at 5:49pm
Definitely. :) I added some yellow.... not so silver anymore *shrug*


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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 08 March 2008 at 1:01pm
Skull did an edit for me so I updated it.

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With a background.


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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 10 March 2008 at 12:14pm
I think this might be the final update!


And the sprite version! Left one's for light backgrounds, right one's for dark.


I fixed some stuff based on Skull's crits and some crits I got at another forum. I like it much better now.


Edited by Aleiav - 10 March 2008 at 12:43pm
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