Help, guys! I made a puffle beds but it hasn't been approved yet! Delfos suggested that I put my work here to get help and tips, so I put it here XD. Anyway here it is:



Is there anything to add??? Anything I should fix?? Please tell me if you will !


Edited by Bloo - 17 March 2008 at 12:08am

The first thing that struck me was the subtle shadow shades.
Try darkening the shadow colours and this'll go someway to improving the form.
You may wish to add a few more colour values too and try and round off the shape a little more. At the moment they appear quite flat even though your outline is pretty spot on.

Presentation could be improved as well. You have them in a neat line at the moment but it might be worth re organising them into a more interest formation.

On a personal note, I would of added a slight difference to each bed so they didn't look like carbon copies.

You're on the right tracks though. It won't take a lot oto make these look great.