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Bloo
Seaman
Joined: 08 March 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
![]() Topic: Puffle Beds: Help Pls!Posted: 17 March 2008 at 12:08am |
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Help, guys! I made a puffle beds but it hasn't been approved yet! Delfos suggested that I put my work here to get help and tips, so I put it here XD. Anyway here it is:
![]() ![]() Is there anything to add??? Anything I should fix?? Please tell me if you will !Edited by Bloo - 17 March 2008 at 12:08am |
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xeroxz2k7
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Joined: 26 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 37 |
![]() Posted: 17 March 2008 at 12:42am |
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How about trying to add more details and de-saturate the colours? =P
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AndyOaks
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Joined: 07 August 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 55 |
![]() Posted: 17 March 2008 at 3:03am |
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The first thing that struck me was the subtle shadow shades.
Try darkening the shadow colours and this'll go someway to improving the form. You may wish to add a few more colour values too and try and round off the shape a little more. At the moment they appear quite flat even though your outline is pretty spot on. Presentation could be improved as well. You have them in a neat line at the moment but it might be worth re organising them into a more interest formation. On a personal note, I would of added a slight difference to each bed so they didn't look like carbon copies. You're on the right tracks though. It won't take a lot oto make these look great. |
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Bloo
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Joined: 08 March 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
![]() Posted: 27 March 2008 at 4:21am |
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I won't finish it for now, sorry. Good-bye and thanks everybody for your help. I'll make a new piece of art.
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