Pixel Joint Forum: (MATURE CONTENT 18+) Women In Water

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Hey. I decided to start pixel art, after years of making small 32 x 32 sprites for use in game makers and such, and here is my first attempt so far. I want to make sure I am doing the shading correctly. The face was a piss poor attempt, but I just couldn't seem to get the eyes right. But if you could, give me some c+c. Thanks.

Edited by Xazrael - 01 April 2008 at 12:39pm

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Xazrael Seaman Joined: 30 March 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Topic: (MATURE CONTENT 18+) Women In Water - WIP Posted: 31 March 2008 at 12:00am
	Hey. I decided to start pixel art, after years of making small 32 x 32 sprites for use in game makers and such, and here is my first attempt so far. I want to make sure I am doing the shading correctly. The face was a piss poor attempt, but I just couldn't seem to get the eyes right. But if you could, give me some c+c. Thanks. Edited by Xazrael - 01 April 2008 at 12:39pm
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 31 March 2008 at 7:01am
	i would discard the non-Pixel art water layer, unless this is an intended hybrid. and about the anatomy... the colors and the general desing(apart from the mentioned face) are somewhat unnatural... too cartoony for... my taste -?- anyway, when working with anatomy is always good to have a few references, and post them if you're already using them. also, your colors could blend a bit more together... they aren't looking too organic also. perhaps decreasing the saturation would do the job.
	I ate leel's babies
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Inventrix Midshipman Joined: 01 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 77	Posted: 31 March 2008 at 2:55pm
	There are a lot of anatomical issues, but since you seem more concerned with the shading right now I'll just echo Metaru's suggestion to use references, and let you decide if you want any c&c on the pose etc.
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 31 March 2008 at 9:08pm
	oh yes, i didn't notice the pose of the legs... >_>
	I ate leel's babies
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0xDB Commander Joined: 15 March 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 209	Posted: 01 April 2008 at 9:49am
	"This image or video violated our terms of service. -photobucket" is all I see. Wow, must have been quite pornographic. :)
	0xDB \| twitter
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Xazrael Seaman Joined: 30 March 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Posted: 01 April 2008 at 12:38pm
	lol, whoops, forgot photobucket doesn't quite like that stuff, :D ill upload it to imageshack soon.
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