Pixel Joint Forum: Demon

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   Among other wees try to make one large WIP demon ...
I dislike his axe ... I think need part at the back !!! In second variant have very dark part behind axe /on the stomach/ !?

Thanks for all C&C in advance ...
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:) GDGB :)

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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Topic: Demon - WIP Posted: 15 August 2005 at 12:18am
	Among other wees try to make one large WIP demon ... I dislike his axe ... I think need part at the back !!! In second variant have very dark part behind axe /on the stomach/ !? Thanks for all C&C in advance ... ======================= :) GDGB :)
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Wannahlakujuu Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 15 August 2005 at 6:36am
	Ok, I don't really understand what you just said, so I'll just comment on the image. Firstly, I love the eyes, they look very evil. Also, the horns and hair look great, and the background that you did on the first image. Now, the things I don't like are the torso, it looks a little pillow-shaded, as does the rest of the skin. I actually like the better in the first one, it fits the pose more, and looks like he has a steady grip.
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 15 August 2005 at 9:58am
	I like the position of the axe where it is coming towards us. The other axe position looks ackward. His right arm seems a little "tucked in". Maybe if the elbow came out a little bit to balance. His right foot looks a little stumpy, that front on position is a real pain to pull off so it doesn't look weird. Other than that it looks really good dude.
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Bear Commander Joined: 20 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 147	Posted: 15 August 2005 at 12:28pm
	pillow shading, anatomy, colors
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 15 August 2005 at 11:28pm
	just some progress ... here repair I think 30-40% from his body for now ... Thanks Wannahlakujuu such comments always make me to sit down and work more :) I'll try for elbow sedge Bear ... about colours ... hm I think they must to be dark with more brown ? ======================= :) GDGB :)
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Wannahlakujuu Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 16 August 2005 at 8:02am
	That looks a lot better, torso and everything. One thing is that his right leg, the shin, looks a little too wide, or fat. Might just be me, but it just looks off. Anyway, great improvement from the first one on the torso and legs. Great job
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