jay lenno?

haha.. I'd suggest going for a more fleshy skin tone...  judging from the color of the hair, you might want to go with something lighter.  MAYBE even something closer to the back ground color of the forums.

something seems uneven, though.. I just don't know what it is.

oh man I said jay lenno and I meant connan obrien!!!

I actually think you need to bring the right eye (his left) close to the outside of his face.

Blocky or not, maybe he wanted it to be blocky. I really don't believe it that he wanted it to be real looking or real shape...

Nose is flat, yes. As I can see, there is a lighter line on the edge of noise, but make it more lighter, like you have in the outer corner. And add the dark line into the inner corner of nose.

Maybe add some light line at the downside of mouth ending too, as light shining back from mouth edge, so the mouth would be like more inner.

I don't know what kind of material you want ti to be, but the red part could use some more lighter shine on the edges what you have.

Ohhh...

Here, i made an edit for you. That should give you a picture.

You just don't seem to get the light.

Seriously.

Anyway, I really like it, even though it isn't really the style I like, it isn't that bad. Since I don't really have any experience doing these, I can't crit much, but I know that it is getting better

yeah and maybe sideburns? little ones... 

Originally posted by imaxcs

You just don't seem to get the light.

You just don't seem to have the manners.

Ohh, you are so f**kin right. I don't have the bloody manners at all.

I don't need manners as long as I am alive. Manners are nothing more than pplain words. Ridiculous lies.

There was a world, like 2 centuries ago, in Abessinia where people had manners to tortue people. Local king was entertraining himself by piercing the eyes out of his prisoners and some servants by using pins while he was meeting with the guests of his country. Now those were manners.

You may say whatever nice but if you still piss into another mans well, then better be honest!

I may say "Oh thats so nice piece but maybe you just place that line to somwhere else where it would look more beautiful than it looks now," but I don't, because I feel as same cold as now and that wouldn't be critics to rip his work apart. And besides, being honest is less writing and you don't have to remember anything.

Thats the f**king way of manners and thats how I am going to be!

u may not feel that way about manners, however u dont need to be so negative.  u can give people criticism without being rude.

dutrho i like the style of this piece but i think its a little plain more texture and facial details would be good  i also think u cood change the skin color.