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Quote mdog95 Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:20pm
Now that I'm FINALLY done with dealing with school for now, I'll join this. I was thinking drawing the first Mac ever released and animating some phrases coming on the screen. Then, below that, the newest Macbook with "RIP Steve Jobs" appearing on the screen. I'm not so sure how smooth I can make the fading text since messing with the opacity will make colors not on the palette, but I'll do my best.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:23pm
Is anyone gonna think of coloring "Glyder"...do we even have real Macheads here :|
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Quote mdog95 Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:26pm
Actually, I'll do the landscape and put the computers next to each other. That would look a lot better.

And I don't even know what that is :P
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:48pm
I finished! It only remains for me the BG that will be more complicated. Help me!

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Quote shampoop Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:52pm
Glyder? How about Scarab of RA! lmao
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Quote shampoop Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 3:25pm
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I finished! It only remains for me the BG that will be more complicated. Help me!



I was thinking. The dimensions for an ipad are 9.56 x 7.47 in. I asked mspaint and it said that is about 914 x 717 pixels. So the hieght is roughly 1.27 times larger than the width.

Your ipad is 109x130 pixels. To get the dimensions correct, you should use 102 x 130 or 109 x 138.



I'll leave the bezel width as an excercise.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 3:45pm
Originally posted by shampoop

Glyder? How about Scarab of RA! lmao


*faints*
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Quote mdog95 Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 3:56pm
I finished the line art to the first Mac. Give me any feedback as to how the general outline of it can be better. I'm doing the line art first since I'm so unfamiliar with drawing computers in general.



I moved the sides and top one pixel out so the indent to the screen would come out more.



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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 4:23pm
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Originally posted by luizfelipespr

I finished! It only remains for me the BG that will be more complicated. Help me!



I was thinking. The dimensions for an ipad are 9.56 x 7.47 in. I asked mspaint and it said that is about 914 x 717 pixels. So the hieght is roughly 1.27 times larger than the width.

Your ipad is 109x130 pixels. To get the dimensions correct, you should use 102 x 130 or 109 x 138.



I'll leave the bezel width as an excercise.

Thank you, I will give credit for its size, hehe.
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 6:43pm
I finished. I decided to leave the background white even.
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Quote JeffPNO Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 7:31pm
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JeffPNO: Make it more clearly apple-shaped so it is unambiguous that it represents the appleocalypse.


That's actually a good idea... Hmm..

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Quote mdog95 Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2011 at 8:17pm
I'll start working on the line art for the Macbook now.
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Quote JeffPNO Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:32pm


Again, Anything I can do to make it more interesting? Also, the shading on the cloud....
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Quote CELS Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:58pm
Surt had a great idea, which would definitely make it more interesting. Beyond that, I would say...
- Maybe create more of a background? Right now it's very flat, with a foreground and a background.
- The asteroid is very dark. It looks like it's supposed to be casting a strong light against the cloud and ground, but that doesn't seem possible since it's just brown and dark purple.
- Use more colours to give the dinosaur and the ground more depth. It's a limited palette, but I don't think you've used its full potential yet. Look at some of the other work in this thread, and don't be afraid to experiment with colors like others have.
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Quote JeffPNO Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 1:35pm
Yeah, I agree. I'm actually experimenting with Surt's suggestion right now.

And thank you for the suggestions. I was thinking about making some sort of background, but haven't gotten around to it yet. As for the meteor, I played with different colours for quite a while, but nothing seemed to look right. The orange/brown & Purple was the best looking, to me.
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Quote showtime Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 1:58pm
ugh this is what I get for not planning things out in more detail from the start


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Quote CELS Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 2:24pm
I'm not generally a fan of abstract art, but you should be pleased with creating something unique. I think this is something a lot of artists on here would appreciate.
 
This reminds me of one of my favourite artists, Wayne Barlowe, who is known for his creative designs. Like you, he tends not to plan out things in detail from the start, and just lets his "brushes do the thinking".
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Quote mdog95 Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2011 at 10:44pm
Wow, so it's already 25 hours before the deadline, and I only have the line art for one computer done because I've been so damn busy. Unfortunately, I'm going to have to gut this down to something a little bit more simple. I guess a good background and a few meaningful things about Jobs with the fading text and whatnot.
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Quote Graindolium Replybullet Posted: 16 October 2011 at 3:15pm
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 16 October 2011 at 3:27pm
you need to use the palette provided for the challenge.

using references? the penguin should have a much smaller beak and head, and lower eyes. looks kinda like a dinosaur atm.

make sure to use a reference on the toilet as well the rim should be much narrower, more of an oval than a wide circle. also seems you haven't decided how the tank of the toilet will connect to the bowl.

@mdog: show don't tell


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Quote mdog95 Replybullet Posted: 16 October 2011 at 5:24pm
Um... k. I colored the computer.

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Quote Loonybin Replybullet Posted: 16 October 2011 at 9:13pm
Originally posted by jalonso

Is anyone gonna think of coloring "Glyder"...do we even have real Macheads here :|


Damn, good idea.  I only ever played Glyder Pro, but I have good memories of that... I wish I could still play it!
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