Pixel Joint Forum: CHALLENGE 7/16/2012: Pixel Joint Magazine

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   @ Lehmure: I think the problem with the lava is that it normaly flows to a lower point, like a river. The lava lines now seem a bit off as it is not clear how it flows in respect with the surrounding area. In other words: you need one higher point, and from there several flows to a lower point (now the perspective seems a bit off as lines go up and down and up again)

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TheoVision Seaman Joined: 05 January 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 16	Posted: 19 July 2012 at 10:43am
	@ Lehmure: I think the problem with the lava is that it normaly flows to a lower point, like a river. The lava lines now seem a bit off as it is not clear how it flows in respect with the surrounding area. In other words: you need one higher point, and from there several flows to a lower point (now the perspective seems a bit off as lines go up and down and up again)
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Lehmure Midshipman Joined: 01 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 65	Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:26am
	Thanks Theo, but i not gonna work in the jedi fighting in the lava, i cant do the other jedi. D: Thats why i made the Darth Vader, and thanks for the critiques. (Sorry, my english almost gave me canc?r. .-.)
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Dont Midshipman Joined: 09 February 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 45	Posted: 19 July 2012 at 2:44pm
	what u guys think of this?
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shampoop Commander Joined: 12 January 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 202	Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:33pm
	wip2
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TheoVision Seaman Joined: 05 January 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 16	Posted: 20 July 2012 at 12:54am
	Quick update - didn't have as much time yesterday as I hoped... Again, changed some bits, worked some more on the composition, added more color. Hope you like.
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Nikonani Midshipman Joined: 08 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 42	Posted: 20 July 2012 at 6:07am
	Very nice Theo, I definitely like where it's going I'm sure you know of it, but if you perhaps don't there's a weird bit of dithering going on in the area you updated that really stands out to me and ruins the whole "shiny, 3D trophy" effect (once you see it you can't unsee it!): I think the previous rev actually was going in the right direction with that little "glare" area. Other than that it stands out as my favorite magazine so far, awesome stuff Edited by Ashbad - 20 July 2012 at 6:13am
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Nevercreature Commander Joined: 04 July 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 164	Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:37am
	A W.I.P.
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Danori Seaman Joined: 29 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 20 July 2012 at 9:56pm
	xD
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Gamamoto Seaman Joined: 10 May 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 26	Posted: 21 July 2012 at 5:48am
	Amazing :') I like the way it's going !
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Digital Seaman Joined: 15 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Posted: 21 July 2012 at 10:33am
	Applied several shading techniques plus minimized usage of shades of colors. I might edit this or add more features to it after I lose my laziness in a bit. xD P.S Just so you know, I like wizards. :] Edited by Digital - 21 July 2012 at 10:35am
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Danori Seaman Joined: 29 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 21 July 2012 at 2:42pm
	Done! The shading was inspired by one of TheoVisions pieces :) Edited by Danori - 21 July 2012 at 2:46pm
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Stronghold257 Seaman Joined: 08 July 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33	Posted: 21 July 2012 at 3:45pm
	Nice Danori.
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AirStyle Commander Joined: 13 November 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 376	Posted: 21 July 2012 at 6:27pm
	Hands down, Danori, yours is the most hilarious.
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Danori Seaman Joined: 29 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 21 July 2012 at 7:35pm
	That is exactly what I was going for! Mission Accomplished xD
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Digital Seaman Joined: 15 July 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 28	Posted: 21 July 2012 at 8:59pm
	Made some edits. -> Still gonna make some edits. :]
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Innomin Seaman Joined: 14 August 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:18pm
	Posting this to force myself to finish it. It started as practice for larger/smaller characters than I'm used to, and backgrounds. It ended up being most of my week... Obviously the text and sky need a little work. I'm going to see the new Batman movie in an hour, and I'll probably finish this up after that. Any other glaring errors on my part would be appreciated CC, even though I know it's a tall order for such a short amount of time. Oh, and bonus points for naming all the girls in the corner. The only hint is they are in games released/TBR/re-released in 2012. @Theovision: Is that subliminal messaging? Well it certainly worked - you definitely have a #1 there. Since you suggested the comp, are you submitting that piece for judging? It's apparent that you only worked on it this week, I'm just asking from a rules standpoint. I'm too new here to really know how it works... @Dredlockz: Very nice PR-type style. He's one of my favorites as well, and you've captured it nicely. Also, good font work all around. It really looks like a magazine cover. @Danori: I can never unsee that now. But seriously, the soft colors work very well with the subject matter, and the shading is fantastic. I wish the background was a little more saturated (...or something), to separate it a bit more from the foreground. @Digital: I'm liking the polish you're doing. No pun intended. The border is very nice as well, and it's making me rethink a few things...
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Innomin Seaman Joined: 14 August 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 22 July 2012 at 11:41pm
	I'm back, with a finished piece and some disappointment in Christopher Nolan. ...Bane... Heh, guess I was too late for CC. I uploaded the final to the comp, with only hours left. Is it bad I started on Monday?
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