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Quote fawful Replybullet Posted: 27 July 2012 at 8:30am
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Quote Kanonsis Replybullet Posted: 27 July 2012 at 11:22am


This is what I've done so far, but it looks more cyborg then robot, so wondering if that's allowed.
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Quote JerryPie Replybullet Posted: 27 July 2012 at 1:03pm
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This is what I've done so far, but it looks more cyborg then robot, so wondering if that's allowed.


looks like a robot to me...
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Quote Christoballs Replybullet Posted: 27 July 2012 at 2:31pm
->Kanonsis: the ear and eye seem quite far apart, maybe make them closer?

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Still WIP
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Quote Graindolium Replybullet Posted: 27 July 2012 at 4:30pm
young Vampire becoming old Wizard Vampire

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Quote failureboy Replybullet Posted: 27 July 2012 at 9:45pm
@fawful, cool design, and I prefer the red background.
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Quote AirStyle Replybullet Posted: 27 July 2012 at 10:35pm
I'm SOOOO late on this, but this is what I got so far...



It's supposed be a ninja that's cloaked, thus refracting the light around his face but revealing his eyes. It's hard to make the glass shading right, though. Any help here?
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Quote Night Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:29am
@Graindolium
I dunno why, but it looks really nice, it has this unique style, can't explain. :P
I have some problems with the anatomy, but overall it's really good. =)

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Quote Gamamoto Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:51am
Here is mine, need to finish it soon.
I really don't know what to do for the beard, looks awful to me.



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Quote Grimm_Dingo Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 5:51am
founds some time again, hopefully get this one submitted in time, does this classify as stylised?
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Quote Damian Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 6:05am

Here's the latest WIP. I need to really do an anatomy study again :/ Now to figure out the background.

Here's a WIP animation for interest sake. I do enjoy these.


Christoballs, that looks great so far. You're currently on 13 colours btw.

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Quote Grimm_Dingo Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 7:30am
which one looks better, is the right one more stylised or just lame


*added some symmetrical derivations, seeming as a combo might be against entry rules, thoughts anyone?

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Quote Mikebissle Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 9:12am
In and of itself it looks good, though I don't feel the shading on the right really adds anything as far as stylization.

The two halves are so different I could see it being interpreted as half-ninja, half-evil robot, and based on what's transpired before, combos would be against the rules.

 If you had just posted the symmetrical versions, I would have never guessed they started off combined. The one on the left looks like a ninja, while the one on the right could maybe be a dark wizard.

With some asymmetry added in, I think you could post either one of the bottom two. Nice to see you on here, by the way. ;)
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Quote Terrify Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 11:45am
Originally posted by Graindolium

young Vampire becoming old Wizard Vampire &


There's nothing really wizardish or vamprish about it :/
Anyone can have a beard.

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Quote fawful Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 4:35pm
thanks


hows this?

I didn't like the contrast on the red one so i made the robot darker in this one
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Quote Subsik Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 5:02pm
I'm pumped for this one! Let's go!

@Graindolium I'm not a massive fan of that, it just doesn't seem as obvious as it should do in my opinion. As said above, anyone can have a beard.
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Quote Christoballs Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 6:25pm
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Thanks for the feedback, Jim! I did reach at one point but I think it's down to 12 again now.
I like the way you did the hair for your wizard: simple yet effective. I think you can make the background say more about the character, though.


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Quote Grimm_Dingo Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 8:30pm
@bissle yeah well I kinda had symmetry in mind the entire time to be honest, I find it interesting and fun to do it that way.

and vampires:




kinda meh :/
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Quote AirStyle Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 9:01pm
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I would really like some help on this... I can't seem to get the cloaking effect right.
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 9:02pm
@Airstyle: are you talking about this page? issue resolved?

@Grimsane: love the second one (upload your Pixelation avatar to the gallery too please!)


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Quote Grimm_Dingo Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 9:23pm
k yeah got a lot of stuff I should upload, thanks for reminding me x_x

wasn't happy with him so sym'dev'd him

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Quote AirStyle Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 9:31pm
Was I hate speeching or spamming? By the way, this isn't a doodle. I'm actually trying to get it to work. No one will respond: not even to say, "It sucks."



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Quote Grimm_Dingo Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 10:17pm


leaning toward the one on the right, which will keep a a relatively consistent style across 4 of my entries

hope you guys don't mind my tendency to churn out multiple entries :x

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Quote AirStyle Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 10:26pm
@Grimm_Dingo: I like the one on the right. The square dithering kind of reminds me of a smoke bomb type of thing.
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Quote a3um Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2012 at 11:45pm
@Grimm Dingo - the 2nd vampire (the pale one) is really awesome.

hopefully-the-second-entry.wip

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Quote Digital Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2012 at 2:48am
Uhm, an evil robot. I guess.
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Quote Gamamoto Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2012 at 3:10am
Update :


I need 4 more colors.

Edit : added lighting on the beard




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Quote Grimm_Dingo Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2012 at 4:11am
@AirStyle thanks, and yeah went with that one.

@a3um thanks, awesome WiP too, is he holding a hand mirror that he can't see himself in? :D
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2012 at 10:35am
Gamamoto: enlarge the cranium. Also the entire face sort of slant forward toward the jaw (and slopes back toward the forehead), and the ear is placed too high. Make sure to usereferences of actual human heads.
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Quote Gamamoto Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2012 at 2:01pm
Better ?
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Quote Christoballs Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2012 at 4:15pm
Um... my evil robot isn't in the Weekly Challenge list and I can't put it in for some reason. Can a moderator fix that quickly please?

->Gamamoto: The biggest issue I have with your piece is in regards of the beard's shading. I think you can go for something simpler and less noisy, like the the technique Jim16 used for his wizard. The second thing that's restricting you is your palette: I'd suggest you make some colours less saturated and in between primary colours, like for example a desaturated orange. Think about your colour ramps: what colour is what? what kind of light is there in the scene? etc.
I started an edit:

Hope it helps.
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Quote Graindolium Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2012 at 10:46pm
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Quote Gamamoto Replybullet Posted: 30 July 2012 at 2:38am
Oh thanks it helps a lot but, I won't make it for the challenge, i'll try to finish it anyway.
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