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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 2:05am
Right now you have frowning eyebrows. Before you had eyebrows like this

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which makes him more evil than angry. I guess thats a problem.
Also, give him a smile. Even the paint does not make him smile. Smile and some evil eyes together are very evil :)

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Quote Photocopier Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 2:53am
I'd say more shadows around the eyes, under the brow and from the hat. also make the mouth more of a lear.
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Quote Ergg Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 6:17am
I don't know if i will manage to finish it. But I'll intend to :






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Quote Antiboton Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 8:14am
Originally posted by skeddles

Keep going adam ^^



He kinda lost his evil expression. How do I fix?


Maybe closing his eyes a little... more in the middle

And marking the lines below his nose. The ones that connect mouth and nose.


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Quote Opacus Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 9:03am
Here's mine so far. Haven't joined in on the fun for far too long. I'm trying to stay away from yellow and green:



EDIT: Damn, just thought that I need to use the entire pallete.
I'm not gonna use them a whole lot though

EDIT 2:
Here's an update with all colours.



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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 3:04pm

I think I got the evil back. I hope.

I like how many of these clowns are evil.


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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 3:11pm
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I'm trying to stay away from yellow and green

 I see what you did there.
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 3:24pm
Originally posted by Metaru

Originally posted by Opacus

I'm trying to stay away from yellow and green

 I see what you did there.


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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 3:51pm

Okay so uh... I went to a blank canvas with the colors and went to work.
Completely forgetting I was supposed to do a clown...
So many changes were made among a perspective fix and a few other things.
The clown was like the last thing I did, so I don't know if I should submit it.

I am the jesus of PJ.
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Quote Opacus Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 4:01pm
Originally posted by Metaru

Originally posted by Opacus

I'm trying to stay away from yellow and green

 I see what you did there.


Not following you.
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Quote Adam Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2009 at 7:00pm
@Souly: that scene is fantastic. Tough the clown takes away a bit, it's awesome overall. That tree is one of your best works.
 
@skeddles: Considering techniques it's great as expected from you, but the proportions are a bit dissonant.
 
My piece is not improving the way I planned so I just quit this challenge, and post my last WIP here:
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Quote King of Games Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2009 at 1:21am
skeddles: I think his eye is too big and his arm is too small, makes him look like a little boy, you know?
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