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Justincrdibl
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Joined: 24 August 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 36 |
   Posted: 02 September 2009 at 3:37pm |
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Man I'm really stuck with what to do for a background... Any suggestions?
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x-death
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Joined: 09 February 2019 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 151 |
Posted: 03 September 2009 at 4:31am |
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nickoledion made a tv show called real monsters. i was expecting to see a character like that in here. even know you would have to make one of your own version of there characters to make it qaulify, i was expecting more of those kind of entries to be honest. :(
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orenshtiv
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Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 03 September 2009 at 4:59am |
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yeah.. i know "Real Monsters" it was a really godo show,they gotta do a new version of it,with ickis,obelina,and krom,lol
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x-death
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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 5:03am |
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it would be a massive hit if they did!
hope someone does a peice based on that idea. if done well it would probably get alot of votes. |
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orenshtiv
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Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 03 September 2009 at 6:11am |
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yeah,i really loved that show T~T
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Justincrdibl
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Joined: 24 August 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 36 |
Posted: 03 September 2009 at 7:39am |
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Yeah I remember that show. BTW it was called "Aaahh!!! Real Monsters" :P
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dpixel
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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 8:26am |
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Ok. Plan "B"
This evolved to trample and scream. It was so effective, it's arms de-evolved to just stubs.
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orenshtiv
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Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 03 September 2009 at 10:51am |
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Lol,yeah :P
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ekobor
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Joined: 20 February 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 194 |
Posted: 03 September 2009 at 4:04pm |
I feel done. And as I'm leaving to my dad's, I have no more time to work on it, so I suppose it is done. I think I did well. |
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WtfApples
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Joined: 17 May 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2 |
Posted: 03 September 2009 at 4:32pm |
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ekobor: i think those raindrops in the background aren't pixel art.
it looks like the same raindrop resized and with different opacities. |
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orenshtiv
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Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 04 September 2009 at 2:15am |
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@ekobor - wow! nice! :D ,but i think you can do a better shading on his stumicc,lol :P (sorry for my english,im from israel.. :P )
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camlio
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Posted: 04 September 2009 at 11:43am |
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i have one WIP:
 he is nessie (lake ness monster) |
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orenshtiv
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Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 04 September 2009 at 12:52pm |
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ummm...i think those weird water signs you did from the upper right are un needed, if you'll remove them it could be really nice! :D
and he's head...is a little small,make it bigger,Good luck. (oh,and sorry for my english,im an hebrew speaker,lol) |
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camlio
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Posted: 04 September 2009 at 1:51pm |
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thank you oren, i am going to improve the shadows too
jejeje i'm from argentina |
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orenshtiv
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Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 04 September 2009 at 2:06pm |
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no problem,lol,and improving the shadows would be nice,and what about the head? and those waves up there? you have only 2-3 days,lol
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ekobor
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Posted: 04 September 2009 at 2:36pm |
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Originally posted by WtfApples
ekobor: i think those raindrops in the background aren't pixel art. it looks like the same raindrop resized and with different opacities. It is the same raindrop. The opacities are not different though. Just larger amounts of white in some than others (if that makes sense?) I don't think copy paste is against the rules? I could go ahead and make three more rain drops of different sizes, but in the end it would be extremely similar, and a waste of time. As for the shading Yup, I could probably make it better, but I have run out of time. ^^;; I might come back to it after the contest is over though. |
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camlio
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Posted: 04 September 2009 at 3:21pm |
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here it is, i improved it:
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Manjaman
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Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
Posted: 04 September 2009 at 3:44pm |
 Quite weird for the moment : tell me what you think about it... |
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Argyle
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Posted: 04 September 2009 at 6:02pm |
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No matter how hard I try and take my mind off of it, all I hear are the sounds of Storm Troopers falling from platforms, Boba Fett falling into Sarlacc pits, No-Faced villains falling from scaffolding, puppets getting shot, robots getting shot, and every other disposable being disposed of.
Surely a combination of all these things would embody something completely more bizarre than a humanoid creature if combined into one big lump of a monster, yeah?  Ok, I'll keep trying. |
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a3um
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 12:03am |
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Here is my wip:
 @ Manjaman - Lol, dirty deer-bird rocks! Edited by a3um - 05 September 2009 at 12:05am |
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Manjaman
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 1:40am |
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Wow pretty cool concept here, a3um ! Your skin texture is terrific.
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skamocore
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 2:14am |
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@a3um - Awesome.
@Manja - looks good so far, keep going! @camlio - only original creatures. |
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orenshtiv
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Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 05 September 2009 at 1:53pm |
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@camlio - wow! you learn fasstt!,but remember,you have only 1 day to finish it! so make it faast! i wanna see it! :D
p.s. don't forget,if you'll make it-you have my vote :] |
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orenshtiv
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Joined: 28 May 2009 Location: Israel Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 05 September 2009 at 1:55pm |
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@manjaman - you're ruing ur name with that one,it just not right :\
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Manupix
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 1:59pm |
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Camlio: only on very dirty water would you see shadows like this. Looks like milk. (Yum, says Nessie)
Manjaman: from your line, I had imagined a no-color-gollum-like thing, but this fiery version rocks! Maybe the antlers shouldn't be the same golden tone? |
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Manjaman
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Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
Posted: 05 September 2009 at 3:09pm |
 A few things to fix and I'll be done. I like my golden antlers >.< Is the red tail a good idea or should I choose a blue one ? |
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ellie-is
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 3:34pm |
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I think red is okay. That way you dont use a whole color ramp just for the penis.
Maybe you could make an orange tail and penis though. I donno. Looking pretty cool anyway. Maybe you could give him some golden balls too =P |
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tenentenen
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Joined: 08 August 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24 |
Posted: 05 September 2009 at 4:02pm |
 Here's mine. It isn't that good as I'm pretty new to pixel art. comments? criticism? any ideas for a background? general mistakes or tips? |
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I am a person, as is anybody else in this world. I expect nothing from you, except what you expect from me.
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ellie-is
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 4:28pm |
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It has too much unneeded dithering.
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tenentenen
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 4:51pm |
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So here it is without dithering now where is dithering needed?
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I am a person, as is anybody else in this world. I expect nothing from you, except what you expect from me.
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ellie-is
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 5:00pm |
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I dont think its needed. Now you just need to work on your shading, so it shows the shape of the thing. Right now you just have light in one side and dark colors in the other one. Read that apple thing on the noobtutorials thread, I think it explains what I am trying to say.
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tenentenen
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 5:29pm |
 is this any better? Im having a hard time with how the light plays out over this guy. Edited by tenentenen - 05 September 2009 at 5:47pm |
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I am a person, as is anybody else in this world. I expect nothing from you, except what you expect from me.
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a3um
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Posted: 05 September 2009 at 6:48pm |
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Black background is kinda suck, so here is bg wip
 Added 5 more colors so its 16 colors overall (I like that number(: ). What do you guys think about it? PS thanks @Manjaman for idea and motivation :D |
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Manjaman
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Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
Posted: 06 September 2009 at 2:48am |
 Just wanted to show it to you before making the back-ground. EDIT:  Your opinion ? a3um : something's wrong with your backround, the wall shouldn't be so slanting, and it's too close to your creature. What is the white thing on the the right side ? Edited by Manjaman - 06 September 2009 at 3:21am |
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a3um
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Posted: 06 September 2009 at 6:02am |
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@Manjaman, well that wip-image was just the beginning of work on background so i dont really know what was that white thing either :D Slanting is ok since its rock
Here is the result btw (:  |
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Manjaman
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Posted: 06 September 2009 at 6:41am |
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Ok, forget what I said, your background is awesome. The wip wasn't readable in fact, but now, woaw !
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ellie-is
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Posted: 06 September 2009 at 7:59am |
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Awesome, your pic just looks incredibly better now! =)
I love the textures. |
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susuwataris
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Posted: 06 September 2009 at 3:20pm |
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a3um, that's beautiful.
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