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ShadeTornado
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    Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:13am
It's not a very interesting image, but I want to find out what I'm doing wrong and where I can improve :).
This is the original image that I made:


I got some comments on that, remembered a tutorial I read once and changed it into this:


But that edit removed some details (it was harder to see the doors and windows, and the little details in them).
I took another look at it and then tried to create a mix of my first image and my second:


But I still feel that I'm doing something wrong. Can someone give me some tips or maybe remake the image to point out the flaws? That would be really helpful :).

Edited by ShadeTornado - 04 September 2010 at 11:45am
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:23am
Thanks for making a WIP thread for this. Its easier than having every edit being sent back...we don't like doing that to people.
I'll post my c+c later today with some edits to illustrate my opinion on your house.

*for now, remember, you have to make a nice #25 that matches your neighbors, and I won't forget it, so be thinking about that :p


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Quote ShadeTornado Replybullet Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:30am
Originally posted by jalonso

*for now, remember, you have to make a nice #25 that matches your neighbors, and I won't forget it, so be thinking about that :p


What do you mean by this? What's a #25? =P And why should whatever it is be matching my neighbors? =S
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:32am
The iso collab space you claimed (was forced upon you) which you apparently already forgot about :p
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Quote ShadeTornado Replybullet Posted: 04 September 2010 at 11:43am
I didn't forget it =O You just didn't see it :P. I edited my post because paint was acting up and destroying the .gif (now that I'm thinking about it, I could try to do it in paint.NET)
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 04 September 2010 at 6:06pm
More stuff like this in the n00btorial thread in the resource section, if you haven't seen that already.

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Quote ShadeTornado Replybullet Posted: 05 September 2010 at 8:31am
Wow. I wasn't expecting something that detailed =O =P.
It's really helpful though. Thanks a lot :). I think I'll study that a bit more, read that n00btorial thread, play around with some stuff and eventually try posting something like this again. Thanks a lot for the info and the effort you put into this :)
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 05 September 2010 at 9:18am
No biggie, go practice and have fun :)
I was gonna animate it with a UFO flying over it and then exploding the house but thought it was too much, too fast
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Quote vlad61 Replybullet Posted: 05 September 2010 at 1:26pm
lol love those animations where you're like...hey this would be cool. then getting started on it you realize the back breaking work you're in for...
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Quote ShadeTornado Replybullet Posted: 05 September 2010 at 2:31pm
Hehe, maybe I'll try (if I'm able to improve on my pixelart, that is) to make an UFO/exploding house animation XD
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