Pixel Joint Forum: Girl and Soldier WIP.

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   Hello sirs.First, sorry for the bad english.

Well, this is the two WIPs who i am doing. ._.

The soldier:

The girl lineart(Made by me, horay):

And the version almost finished:

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Lehmure Midshipman Joined: 01 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 65	Topic: Girl and Soldier WIP. Posted: 09 June 2012 at 10:44am
	Hello sirs.First, sorry for the bad english. Well, this is the two WIPs who i am doing. ._. The soldier: The girl lineart(Made by me, horay): And the version almost finished:
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onek Commander Joined: 19 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 416	Posted: 09 June 2012 at 11:59am
	the shading on the girl doesnt work at all. it just looks like random patches of color and isnt defining an volume at all. set ur lightsource, for instance, on the right side... try to 'feel' ur volumes and sculpt them with light and shadow... highlights facing towards the light, shadows away... i dont get wats going on with the face... the circly thingy is the nose? that line under it the mouth? i looks kinda awkward as is... also the arms look like they are cut off the should be at least three time longer... maybe she got them behind her back, but still it doesnt work... quick edit
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