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Quote A2J2TIWARI Replybullet Topic: (C&C Needed)Syosa Inspired
    Posted: 08 March 2013 at 8:25am


Today when I was browsing PixelJoint gallery I found this piece by Syosa: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/54100.htm

I have bought my brand new Bamboo One tablet and wanted t get used to it.

I've used Dawnbringer's palette for this piece. Please help me making this better

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Quote AtskaHeart Replybullet Posted: 08 March 2013 at 8:41am
It will look a bit weird if the bottom isn't animated :/. Besides, I'd recommend more color mixes considering you are using DB's colors, results will be awesome prolly :).
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Quote A2J2TIWARI Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2013 at 5:37am
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Quote crozier Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2013 at 9:22am
Better. Much better.
The gun is raising in some rather odd areas. It looks to be made of rubber or something like that.
I would also suggest using a dark brown (or even a normal brown) instead of a black for the outline.
And her mouth on the gas-mask is strange and protruding.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2013 at 10:42am
Too close to the original. Try making it more your thing while keeping the inspiration.
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2013 at 12:12pm
Are you aware that the head is almost 1/3 of the body? and in realistic works this is like 1/8?
Study references of gas masks and hair!
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