Pixel Joint Forum: WIP Mockup

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I was wondering how can I improve this. This is the first mockup I have ever done so, I would really like some CC.

Thanks!

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Bryroz Seaman Joined: 23 November 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Topic: WIP Mockup - Would really like help! Posted: 20 April 2013 at 3:05pm
	I was wondering how can I improve this. This is the first mockup I have ever done so, I would really like some CC. Thanks!
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:58pm
	Hi Bryroz, I think your character is hard to read because it blends with the mountain on the background. A very easy trick is to give him a black outline, or prevent him from ever being in front of a dark BG! What is the material underneath the dirt? Why is it so bright? Detail can be nice, but I think in this case it is distractiing from what we should focus on, which is the character! Good luck on this! Interesting unique work on the sky, keep it that way :D
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