Pixel Joint Forum: [WIP] Capitalist

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   I'm stuck. Something is wrong with this pixel but I totally don't know what. 

So I'm asking for advice.

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shelin Seaman Joined: 16 March 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Topic: [WIP] Capitalist Posted: 06 June 2013 at 7:27am
	I'm stuck. Something is wrong with this pixel but I totally don't know what. So I'm asking for advice.
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Muxaun Commander Joined: 25 November 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 105	Posted: 06 June 2013 at 10:40am
	I am a beginner really, but.. 1) the pipe on the hat looks like it is a part of another picture - it is not connected to him 2) hes right part shall be thinner because he is rotated a bit. Here is a quick example of what I mean.
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Kurieta Commander Joined: 25 May 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 141	Posted: 06 June 2013 at 11:03am
	I too am a beginner, but I think the monacle blends too much with the surrounding skin. That popped out to me as soon as I saw it. You might want to give the shoes a little bit more depth as they seem a tad flat right now, and the hands could use a little shading. Great work though!
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shelin Seaman Joined: 16 March 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 06 June 2013 at 1:24pm
	dunno, I think lineart is quite good but something is wrong with colours or shading
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Friend Commander Joined: 01 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 710	Posted: 06 June 2013 at 1:52pm
	Yes, the colors suffer from lack of contrast. Make the colors more vibrant and popping. Also, the contrast in the shading needs to be greater. Try hue shifting (make the deeper tones more purple and the brighter tones more yellow) to make the colors less boring
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shelin Seaman Joined: 16 March 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 07 June 2013 at 3:50am
	I know theory but it's hard to me to do this on his brown tailcoat.
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