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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Topic: Old V.S. New [FINISHED]
    Posted: 26 March 2006 at 8:28pm
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Couldn't find a hair tut but... oh well. I finished it up as much as I'd like to do with it.




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Quote Blick Replybullet Posted: 26 March 2006 at 9:14pm
The orange skintone in the left one really bothers me. I'm not sure which looks better. The left looks more natural, but perhaps a bit too dark and the one on the right looks too yellow, especially in the highlights. Somewehre in between the two would be best, I'd imagine.
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Quote inkspot Replybullet Posted: 27 March 2006 at 6:15am
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 27 March 2006 at 6:24am

i prefer the old one, but make it less yellow. and AA it yes =P

maybe try to clean the hair up a bit too if possible


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Quote inkspot Replybullet Posted: 27 March 2006 at 11:23am
Hair can be cleaned up with AA, so AA it and everything turns better. There are things that need to be AAed, one thing is certainly hair on that picture, wether it would be the new or old one. But I personally prefer the new one.

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 27 March 2006 at 3:26pm
Originally posted by Blick

The orange skintone in the left one really bothers me. I'm not sure which looks better. The left looks more natural, but perhaps a bit too dark and the one on the right looks too yellow, especially in the highlights. Somewehre in between the two would be best, I'd imagine.


Do you think I should overlay one over the other to find the right color. I have a hard time making pallates, ESPECIALLY skin in particular. I try reading about color theory and choice but I haven't really seemed to grasp it.
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Quote hawken Replybullet Posted: 27 March 2006 at 6:56pm
Originally posted by inkspot

AA


don't think you need to smear everything with AA, it's just your personal preference and maybe not the style, please take that into consideration.
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Quote inkspot Replybullet Posted: 28 March 2006 at 2:20am
No, in this case, it is not about style, but it would actually fix the pic. I am not talking about AAing the edges, but AAing the whole piece, that dither is just not skinnish also.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 28 March 2006 at 8:59am
I disagree. I've seen dithered skin before. I think it's my pallate choice at fault here rather than the dithering.

As for the hair, I'm actually working on improving that, but still. You just said AA. You weren't really specific on what to AA or why you felt that way so it seems like a pretty useless comment.
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Quote inkspot Replybullet Posted: 28 March 2006 at 9:51am

Specifics is needed only when one specific spot is commented, I commented overall piece.

Dithering is right on the nose part, but lower part has some weird dithering on it. Yes, obviously it seems that the orange colour doesn't fit into the nose shading. Shadows should be something blueish-gray on that piece and that dither can be AAed fine, but that is only my point of view.

But yeah, I should have added some specific into my post, as it appears, I apologize.



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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 28 March 2006 at 3:29pm

I prefer the older one, the colours on the new one look far more un-real and odd ^_^

AAing the hair could make the picture look odd, seeing as in the style Aleiav has dithered most of the image. You could try having larger blocks of shade and highlight (like in manga) on the hair, which you could dither. I'd also neaten up the left strap on the top, as it looks a little wobbly.

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 28 March 2006 at 4:16pm
But yeah, I should have added some specific into my post, as it appears, I apologize.


Ah no biggie. :P

Thanks for the crits, both. I thought this was done but apparently it needs more work... lots. Hope to have an update soon but I've got school and the like, which sucks. I'll do me best.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 30 March 2006 at 7:08pm
So I mixed them both and took some crits.

Thoughts?



I'm not really sure if I like the hair but I'm not all together good at it.
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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 30 March 2006 at 7:29pm
Maybe the right side hair (first post) with that version?
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 30 March 2006 at 11:06pm
Make the strap go over the entire arm. D:

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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 31 March 2006 at 3:55am
the hair's shape is a lot better. you lost the energy you had with the older colourschemes though.

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 31 March 2006 at 11:35am
Originally posted by snader

the hair's shape is a lot better. you lost the energy you had with the older colourschemes though.


You like the hair shape? Someone told me it looked like plastic.
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 31 March 2006 at 12:08pm
yeah it's a bit too artificial, but i meant that i like it better then the loose scribbles

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