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alkaline
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Aight, so I made these lines of a soldier.
![]() Can someone point me to a...cloth...folding...shading..tutorial sorta thing? I dunno how. ![]() ![]() do I even need much folding in this? Any uh crits on the lines? edit. ![]() UPDATE AFTER MANY MONTHS LOL ![]() Edited by alkaline - 13 July 2006 at 10:59pm |
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Souly
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The lines look slick, I don't quite know what that lined thing poking out from the right is...
His head almost seems squashed to me... As for folds, maybe some were the knees are since they'd poke out of the material, and one at the crotch. |
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alkaline
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It's supposed to be a cigarette, there's just no color so it isn't that obvious quite yet.
And yeh, I didn't like the head either. Looks funny. But i'll get to that. In due time, in due time. |
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Souly
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No no I knew it was a cig, I'm talking about the square checkered thing poking out.
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Setzer
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probably part of a gun. and the head seems so small =o, so do his hands, and the arms seem kind of thin.
as for doing folds, I'd reccomend scribbling some diaganol lines first, and going with that, adding a few vertical and horizontal lines here and there. thats how I usually get started. |
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alkaline
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Ooh. That. It's supposed to be a gun. I wasn't really sure how to portray the gun. He could be holding it, but then he wouldn't be just standing there.
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alkaline
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just a small stinking update.....after..a month...
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PixelSnader
Commander ![]() ![]() Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
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neds clouor!!
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Artisan
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whoo Ned's clouor is the best clouor!
for some reason i actualy liked the first head better for style reasons however i can see that the seccond one is more realistic.. or as realistic as a 2 cm tall soldier can be... anyway yeh... Ned's clouor |
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Souly
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I second that this Ned's clouor.
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alkaline
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say what now?
....oh. nevermind. Edited by alkaline |
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alkaline
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omg necropost!!!! I started cooloring.
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Skull
Commander ![]() ![]() PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521 |
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Ace so far.. looks a tad too bright though.
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alkaline
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Do you mean too bright as in the whole thing is too bright? Or should I just adjust the main color? Here I brought the brightness down -19.
![]() Here I put down the brightness the same but I kept the skin from before. ![]() Edited by alkaline - 14 July 2006 at 8:35am |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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I like the top one best.
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Skull
Commander ![]() ![]() PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521 |
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yar, top.
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alkaline
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![]() SUPER UPDATE!! Give me something to fix, and I'll fix it. Go ahead! I think I accidentally left the brighter skin palette on it, but I can't check now. Gotta go to some picnic. Edited by alkaline - 15 July 2006 at 9:20am |
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Aleiav
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I'm not sure if I like the dithering of the pants. personally. I liked the other shading, even though it wasn't exactly "smooth".
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Blueberry_pie
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I don't know, I kinda like the dithering better.
Either way, I love the palette. Great colours. |
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halfDemon
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 04 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 318 |
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The dithering makes it seem more "griity." I don't really know another way to say it; the dithering seems less cartoony.
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Every pixel counts, even the dead ones.
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