Hello,

I'd like to make a submission although I'd like to get approval from the WIP before I do so. Do you guys think my piece is appropriate for the gallery?

Hey - Thanks for the kind words, Hap!

I put some effort into experimenting with shadows and lighting in this one. It took me some time to figure out how the shadows created by the creases and folds in his sweatshirt should look but I'm pretty satisfied with how they look and my color selection!

The reasoning for my dark lines on the smoke is because I drew this over a black background.. which I now realize it looks silly over a lighter background

I can see what you mean that the cord on his sweatshirt isn't needed. It doesn't read well.

As for the lighting, I see what you mean, the sun is usually oriented above people and should be lighting up the top of his shoulders some more, although, I was kind of going for a side light source coming from the left which is why I've highlighted the side of his left arm and the top of his left shoulder and opted to leave the right side darker.

Let me know if you think there's a better way I can represent a light source coming from the side!

Don't worry, your short response packs a big punch lol.

It makes sense that the torso would be darker/shadier because he is, of course, hunching over a little bit to hit the bong. Therefor that area probably wouldn't see much direct lighting.

I like how you handled the lighting on his hair and pants, much clearer that the light source is coming from the left... makes my attempt look a little random and splotchy. Hah!

Thanks again.