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Burak
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Topic: Delete This Post!
Posted: 15 December 2006 at 11:20am

DELETE THIS POST!

Edited by Burak - 17 December 2006 at 5:25am

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Krysis
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Posted: 15 December 2006 at 11:42am

Ehem... arms, neck, torso and erm... brows are too thick. And the shoulders are too wide.

I don't like the heads. Seem too big. You use way too many colours.

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Burak
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Posted: 15 December 2006 at 11:45am

its for a game, the girl version is ultimatly crap im asking for peoples help.

its for the warrior class for my game.

Edited by Burak - 15 December 2006 at 11:45am

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Aleiav
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Posted: 15 December 2006 at 3:05pm

You should try to google some reference pictures of muscular women for an idea of what type of shape they should be.

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leel
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Posted: 15 December 2006 at 5:34pm

1. this isn't pixelart - don't use blur tool, or put npa in title. IMO, this wood look better as pure pixelart, right now it looks way too messy for the size.

2. Men and women have VERY different body types, you can't just put a bra on a man and call it a woman. You need to do a lot of research and check out others' sprites or google references. Also it'd seem you need a lot more practice with just traditional drawing to understand the basic human shape

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Burak
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Posted: 16 December 2006 at 8:47am

Hey guys its me again,

This is my character for my game. its the side view...

can someone help me make this betteR?

I couldnt do the head,nose,mouth,foot and underwear :S please help me.

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Larwick
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Posted: 16 December 2006 at 8:54am

Originally posted by Burak

its for a game, the girl version is ultimatly crap im asking for peoples help.

its for the warrior class for my game.

Burak, you have to understand that Krysis was trying to help you with his critisisms. Even if he wasn't very specific, it still should pose helpful in improving your pieces. Don't ignore it next time.

Leel is wise.

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Larwick
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Posted: 16 December 2006 at 11:19am

I just moved your other thread post to here.

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Burak Seaman Joined: 09 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23	Topic: Delete This Post! Posted: 15 December 2006 at 11:20am
	DELETE THIS POST! Edited by Burak - 17 December 2006 at 5:25am
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Krysis Midshipman Joined: 01 May 2006 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 15 December 2006 at 11:42am
	Ehem... arms, neck, torso and erm... brows are too thick. And the shoulders are too wide. I don't like the heads. Seem too big. You use way too many colours.
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Burak Seaman Joined: 09 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23	Posted: 15 December 2006 at 11:45am
	its for a game, the girl version is ultimatly crap im asking for peoples help. its for the warrior class for my game. Edited by Burak - 15 December 2006 at 11:45am
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 15 December 2006 at 3:05pm
	You should try to google some reference pictures of muscular women for an idea of what type of shape they should be.
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 15 December 2006 at 5:34pm
	1. this isn't pixelart - don't use blur tool, or put npa in title. IMO, this wood look better as pure pixelart, right now it looks way too messy for the size. 2. Men and women have VERY different body types, you can't just put a bra on a man and call it a woman. You need to do a lot of research and check out others' sprites or google references. Also it'd seem you need a lot more practice with just traditional drawing to understand the basic human shape
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Burak Seaman Joined: 09 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23	Posted: 16 December 2006 at 8:47am
	Hey guys its me again, This is my character for my game. its the side view... can someone help me make this betteR? I couldnt do the head,nose,mouth,foot and underwear :S please help me.
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 16 December 2006 at 8:54am
	*Originally posted by Burak* its for a game, the girl version is ultimatly crap im asking for peoples help. its for the warrior class for my game. Burak, you have to understand that Krysis was trying to help you with his critisisms. Even if he wasn't very specific, it still should pose helpful in improving your pieces. Don't ignore it next time. Leel is wise.

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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 16 December 2006 at 11:19am
	I just moved your other thread post to here.

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