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Joenorton
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Topic: Iso Building
Posted: 16 April 2007 at 8:44pm

This is a building for my game The City Life. And I was wondering what you guy think about it.I havent added any small details here and there yet though.They will be added to it when it is put on to the board.

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jalonso
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Posted: 17 April 2007 at 5:24am

Nice job so far. I would keep an eye on the scale of things. The ladder is wider than the window for example. Pixelling is good and its laid out well. The sign is hard to read, maybe use the yellows instead of the blue colors so that it reads better? Or the greys from the steps for the BG of the sign, red letters and white outline?
Props, on making the top of the bricks properly

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Joenorton
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Posted: 17 April 2007 at 9:42pm

Originally posted by jalonso

Nice job so far. I would keep an eye on the scale of things. The ladder is wider than the window for example. Pixelling is good and its laid out well. The sign is hard to read, maybe use the yellows instead of the blue colors so that it reads better? Or the greys from the steps for the BG of the sign, red letters and white outline?
Props, on making the top of the bricks properly

Thanks man. I'll fix the sign and the ladder when i have the time.Any other suggestions?

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jalonso
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Posted: 18 April 2007 at 7:38pm

...maybe add a more interesting ledge to the building top, and add some depth to the barber pole signs. You did good, there's not much to fix.

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Posted: 28 April 2007 at 10:31am

The top of the building could do with a few more accesories but the bricks and canopy are very good. I also like the corners of the building where you changed brick colour.

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Joenorton Seaman Joined: 07 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 25	Topic: Iso Building Posted: 16 April 2007 at 8:44pm
	This is a building for my game The City Life. And I was wondering what you guy think about it.I havent added any small details here and there yet though.They will be added to it when it is put on to the board. Joenorton

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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 17 April 2007 at 5:24am
	Nice job so far. I would keep an eye on the scale of things. The ladder is wider than the window for example. Pixelling is good and its laid out well. The sign is hard to read, maybe use the yellows instead of the blue colors so that it reads better? Or the greys from the steps for the BG of the sign, red letters and white outline? Props, on making the top of the bricks properly
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Joenorton Seaman Joined: 07 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 25	Posted: 17 April 2007 at 9:42pm
	*Originally posted by jalonso* Nice job so far. I would keep an eye on the scale of things. The ladder is wider than the window for example. Pixelling is good and its laid out well. The sign is hard to read, maybe use the yellows instead of the blue colors so that it reads better? Or the greys from the steps for the BG of the sign, red letters and white outline? Props, on making the top of the bricks properly Thanks man. I'll fix the sign and the ladder when i have the time.Any other suggestions?

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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 18 April 2007 at 7:38pm
	...maybe add a more interesting ledge to the building top, and add some depth to the barber pole signs. You did good, there's not much to fix.
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Pixelator Midshipman Joined: 28 April 2007 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 73	Posted: 28 April 2007 at 10:31am
	The top of the building could do with a few more accesories but the bricks and canopy are very good. I also like the corners of the building where you changed brick colour.
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