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   I want to make some machinery for "mech scene" ...
Name is - "fly accelerator" because haven't arms ...
I want to be as motorcycle with one pilot and one traveller as in Star Wars :)

I think red light are best choice, but I'm not sure !
32 colours and non animated for now ...

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:) GDGB :)

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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Topic: machinery "Fly Accelerator" ... Posted: 12 July 2005 at 12:30am
	I want to make some machinery for "mech scene" ... Name is - "fly accelerator" because haven't arms ... I want to be as motorcycle with one pilot and one traveller as in Star Wars :) I think red light are best choice, but I'm not sure ! 32 colours and non animated for now ... ====================== :) GDGB :)
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Monstara Commander Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179	Posted: 12 July 2005 at 12:33am
	wow this is cool. only thing that bothers me is the stance of the front guy - his bottom should be farther back on the seat. yes, red lights look best IMO.
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 12 July 2005 at 12:35am
	Red lights are the best choice, but if you are gonna animate it, you should make them blink from red to green, IMO. Great work so far!
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 12 July 2005 at 1:26am
	Thanks Monstara I repair pilot :) ... and I think too for Red lights Ensellitis ... thanks :) ====================== :) GDGB :) Edited by zi-double
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 12 July 2005 at 8:21am
	This is a cool start zi... the only thing that looks off to me is the flame coming from the back of the vehicle. I'm sure once you start animating the flame will look better but right now it looks odd.
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 13 July 2005 at 11:30pm
	thanks sedge ... just one new /I can't say/ machine from last 2 days :) for name maybe "air-strip" :) In front part need more work ... ====================== :) GDGB :) Edited by zi-double
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 14 July 2005 at 12:34am
	Wow, it's looking great... I can't really see anything to add, maybe some kind of dritness?
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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ryan-gfx Commander Joined: 25 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 244	Posted: 14 July 2005 at 1:01am
	Zi, these are encredibly well done, like something out of metal slug :) You are getting better and better, bud
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 14 July 2005 at 4:33am
	I see some mistakes and edit "air-strip" Ensellitis Thanks ryan always glad to read your comments ... and I just try to be better ====================== :) GDGB :)
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 14 July 2005 at 4:55am
	Are you gonna make some kind of game out of these?
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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Xero Midshipman Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 82	Posted: 14 July 2005 at 6:53am
	*Originally posted by ryan-gfx* Zi, these are encredibly well done, like something out of metal slug :) You are getting better and better, bud Agreed completely ryan, your work is getting even better zi, good work :) But I always try to find something to crit, no matter how small so... 2 things, the first, on the back of the fly accellerator, there flames coming out of a 'hole', it doesnt look like a hole because the lighting is placed on the upper part, making it look more like a tiny sphere.. just a tiny crit but still. And the landing thing, on the back triangular things, theres shine on the forwards side of the front most one, but not on the forwards side of the back one? Again a small crit, but I hope it helps! Just goes to show your gettin so good its hard to crit you :P
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Core_12 Seaman Joined: 13 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 35	Posted: 14 July 2005 at 1:17pm
	Nice style. The design of the air-strip is pretty bizarre
	Reality is for people who lack imagination
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 4:48am
	No Ensellitis I make them for my pleasure as always Xero thanks for very usefull and detailed comment ... I repair my mistakes and this crit isn't "tiny" Bizarre like in "Return of the Jedy" Core_12 ... nothing commontly just like idea ... here is opponent part ... She is one split part from mech ... ====================== :) GDGB :)
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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 9:19am
	Dam Zi-double, you are real good at this!!!!!!! =D This would be so kool if u make it into a game or a animated scen or something =P Nice Job
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 12:32pm
	That's a superb piece, but the flames in the back kind of imply that it's moving not bouncing in place.
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 16 July 2005 at 5:01pm
	*Originally posted by sedgemonkey* That's a superb piece, but the flames in the back kind of imply that it's moving not bouncing in place. yep
	"She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
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