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tripnfelt
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Quote tripnfelt Replybullet Topic: Graveyard WIP i guess
    Posted: 07 April 2009 at 11:06am
So I made a quick graveyard





and I didn't intend to do anymore on it but was told by some it was nice but needed stuff. I still have no idea about this aa stuff....

So what have I made better? what have I made worse?



Thoughts?

Thanks for your constructive crit in advance


Edited by tripnfelt - 07 April 2009 at 11:26am
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2009 at 12:01pm
Zoom in :)
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Quote tripnfelt Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2009 at 12:05pm
Wow thanks, you're rad!
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2009 at 12:17pm
thanks :)

- My edit is to support what I said on the gallery-
"Very nice overall. I think your colors could have been better chosen to help with smoothing the worst of the jaggies and still keep everything as is...sort of speak."
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Quote x-death Replybullet Posted: 10 April 2009 at 1:31am
look at jalenso's peice how he improved it. thats exactly what you need to do, colors, methods of shading and improving. all of it!
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Quote tripnfelt Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2009 at 2:29am
I intend to follow jals advice (I need new mouse batteries).
still from what i did b4 are the highlights i was doing too bright/un-necessary. should the fox and rabbit stay? should i revert to the original background color?
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