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MadToaster
Seaman ![]() Joined: 12 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8 |
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![]() I'm new here but I used to post at pixelation. Just wanted some comments on my color choice (too dark? undersaturated) and if my tooning proportion are pleasing to the eyes or not. Anything else that can be said to help improve this is appreciated. I'll do my final draft based on how it looks to me tomorrow and what you guys have to say. Was upset that pixelation disapeared but it's nice to find another place to learn with like minded people. Edited by MadToaster |
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EyeCraft
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425 |
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Hi MadToaster, glad you found your way here. There's a number of
pixelation folk here. Pixelation lives on in our hearts -_- lol.
Hmm, maybe theres too much luminousity contrast between the face and the body parts that are in shadow. Perhaps have the face shadow tones lose some saturation and value. I think he could use a little bit more of a neck, his shoulder literally morphs into his skull. Aaaand I think you need at least 1 more highlight colour for the skin colour and the suit colour, I think. ![]() |
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Godslayer
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 26 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 69 |
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Oi.
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MadToaster
Seaman ![]() Joined: 12 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8 |
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Originally posted by EyeCraft think he could use a little bit more of a neck, his shoulder literally morphs into his skull. Aaaand I think you need at least 1 more highlight colour for the skin colour and the suit colour, I think. ![]() ![]() ![]() Tightened up the anatomy (he's got a neck now. ;p) and tried out using more shades. Also took a look at some official artwork to draw him more accurately. I'll probably try colorizing the line art next to match the light source and a few other things. Anyone see more room to improve? |
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