Pixel Joint Forum: second frame

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workin on the frame after for my comic 

I just dont know about it at all. I want it to be as good as the other.
She has to:
-have a slightly different pose
-Look surprized?

feel free to comment about the first one also

it sucks so far imo, but someone else is gonna have to tell me why 9_9

maybe I should post on pixelation also? I still want more opinions on the first one 

yes, I needed a new topic.

Edited by skeddles - 10 July 2009 at 10:51pm

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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Topic: second frame Posted: 10 July 2009 at 10:45pm
	workin on the frame after for my comic I just dont know about it at all. I want it to be as good as the other. She has to: -have a slightly different pose -Look surprized? feel free to comment about the first one also it sucks so far imo, but someone else is gonna have to tell me why 9_9 maybe I should post on pixelation also? I still want more opinions on the first one yes, I needed a new topic. Edited by skeddles - 10 July 2009 at 10:51pm

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Manjaman Midshipman Joined: 02 October 2016 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 92	Posted: 11 July 2009 at 3:31am
	Sorry, but your bone really looks like a d*ck on the first frame. Is it intentional ? To make the surprise more obvious, you should make a falling tail on your first frame, and a rising one on the second.
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ellie-is Commander Joined: 12 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 706	Posted: 11 July 2009 at 8:11am
	Maybe add more white in the eyes as well.
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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Posted: 12 July 2009 at 5:39pm


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Hatch Admiral Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387	Posted: 15 July 2009 at 7:05pm
	first page rescue GET Can you explain the whole comic or is it a sekrit? And why did you suddenly include the daytime shading? What's going on there? I AM CONFUSED
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ellie-is Commander Joined: 12 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 706	Posted: 15 July 2009 at 7:22pm
	Maybe he was bored. But like I said on msn, eyes need more white, or at least any lighter color.
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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Posted: 16 July 2009 at 8:36pm
	Oh lol, I forgot to explain that here It's what the palette would look like if it was at daytime. But it's not. It's just an example.

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