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   hey give me tips 

this peice could be done or i might decide to keep working.   thanks for ur feed back!

Edited by crow - 13 September 2009 at 2:12pm

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crow Seaman Joined: 30 August 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 26	Topic: my avatar wip Posted: 13 September 2009 at 2:10pm
	hey give me tips this peice could be done or i might decide to keep working. thanks for ur feed back! Edited by crow - 13 September 2009 at 2:12pm
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ekobor Commander Joined: 20 February 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 194	Posted: 13 September 2009 at 3:52pm
	Considering your light source under his beak looks wrong. I think you need one more black shade, and need to angle the shadows more.
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Hatch Admiral Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387	Posted: 13 September 2009 at 6:44pm
	Hey, this is really cool and stylish! But I think the key to this style is nice clean lines and and really nice AA, both of which are lacking a bit. Look at this edit: See how much smoother and cleaner it looks? Try to shoot for more gradual curves and more consistent line weights, and especially work on your AA. It takes more than single dots of intermediate color on long gentle slopes. The AA in my edit is far from perfect, but it might give you a rough idea where you can go from here.
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