First serious work
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 10 September 2025 at 10:34pm
Topic: First serious work
Posted By: |RedNosE|
Subject: First serious work
Date Posted: 05 February 2011 at 2:30pm
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First of all I am new to the forum and do not know if this is the correct area. This is my first job taken seriously, I want you to rate and tell me what I should improve and what to avoid.
I used this template: 
Result: 
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Replies:
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 05 February 2011 at 3:02pm
| try using less saturated colors. the shadows aren't consistent, I assume your light source is overhead, yet the computer desk casts no shadow directly below, instead it behaves as if the light is coming from the right, at about floor level. the border around the window is a bit thick and makes it looks like a frame (window is also a peculiar shape, maybe that's common where you're from). Computer screen seems a bit short. |
Posted By: |RedNosE|
Date Posted: 05 February 2011 at 3:49pm
| Okay, I will improve soon I'll post the result. |
Posted By: vlad61
Date Posted: 06 February 2011 at 8:01pm
| The cracks and spider webs are out of place. Or maybe try making them fit by adding more age to the room. as of now it doesnt look like its very old at all |