5 Pencil
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=3249
Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 1:14am
Topic: 5 Pencil
Posted By: Pieface
Subject: 5 Pencil
Date Posted: 22 October 2006 at 7:41am
Ok im not finished, got to Fix
Just Wanna know if it looks better at the moment?  |
Replies:
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 22 October 2006 at 7:52am
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well it does less round, only i think the lines in the middle should be the lightest yellow, the highlight. also i think the palette as a whole is a little too green-ish like someone already mentioned in the clock thread.
I like the dithering on the eraser, but it's a little hard to see, so more contrast perhaps?
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Posted By: Pieface
Date Posted: 22 October 2006 at 7:58am
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Ok Thanks for the suggestions, I will work on that as soon as I can |
Posted By: Pieface
Date Posted: 22 October 2006 at 8:14am
 Is that looking a bit better?EDIT:  Took away weird Black Lines, Added Chew marks, Took away Black Lines, Started AA, made Lead part a bit longer |
Posted By: cpaw88
Date Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:37am
| It looks plastic a bit, the tip should look more wooden, everything else looks great. |
Posted By: Pieface
Date Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:41am
yeh i said i was gonn fix that... and guess what I did   Hows it looking now guys and gals |
Posted By: cpaw88
Date Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:50am
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Originally posted by Pieface yeh i said i was gonn fix that... and guess what I did Hows it looking now guys and galsI was just giving my C&C on this peice even though you stated that you're working on fixing those parts. |
Posted By: Pieface
Date Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:54am
| I know... I wasn't complaining, I was hoping the smilie would make it look like sarcasm tbh |
Posted By: Equinoxx
Date Posted: 22 October 2006 at 1:58pm
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i'm glad you took queues of my example. that's good
however, there are still some parts that aren't all that. for example, the curves aren't the same everywhere. I'm talking about the outercurves of the form compared to the innercurves of the light yellow line a whole lot better then it was though ------------- http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=3306 - Zombies  |