Cortez
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 5:31pm
Topic: Cortez
Posted By: Guss
Subject: Cortez
Date Posted: 22 April 2007 at 10:46am
Cortez from PM TTYD
i'think i'm done. Because i lost interrest in this PA and want to make something else, however i still want to know your opinion.
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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 22 April 2007 at 1:52pm
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Very nice, delete the white BG (www.giffy.com), palette and make a seperate image using just the head as your new original avvy :D ------------- |
Posted By: MashPotato
Date Posted: 22 April 2007 at 2:09pm
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It's nice, I like it ^_^. One thing that bugs me is the long thin sword, there are some dark pixels on the upper edge that makes the blade look irregularly-shaped. Also, because the grey is very similar in colour to the glove colour, the tip looks like it's going behind the hand holding the curved sword, which looks a bit odd. ------------- http://theindiestone.com - the INDIE STONE |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 22 April 2007 at 5:05pm
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What jalonso means is http://www.iaza.com - http://www.iaza.com . I think it seems rather muddy and pillowshaded because you have the dark color as a border around all of the tan shapes. Eliminate the border where it shouldn't be and move your highlights to show the lightsource more like the sword does.
I might also add that the second arm from the right is very hard to envision at the meeting of the hand and arm. The wrist would have to be a really strange shape to accomodate the difference in positions there and so I suggest you move the hand or arm to fix the weird disjointment there.
I realize you said you didn't really want to update it, but keep these things in mind on your next piece. If you have a program that can use layers, make use of them to avoid situations like the onw with his wrist here. Good luck! ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
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Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 22 April 2007 at 5:14pm
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Is he made of bean bags? ------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/"> 
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