WIP Werewolf
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 19 May 2026 at 10:02pm
Topic: WIP Werewolf
Posted By: Wyverii
Subject: WIP Werewolf
Date Posted: 26 November 2007 at 8:23am
  Started off with the head and have expanded it out into a torso. Still needs a lot of work but it's starting to look quite good. I'm planning to make a black and white version and a colored version. Any crit would be helpful but bear in mind that the shading on the torso isn't finished yet ^^; |
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Posted By: Skaka
Date Posted: 26 November 2007 at 10:10am
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Might wanna bring his head a wee bit forward otherwise his throat would be attached right onto his spine XD Other than that give him nipples :P Looks good though I like the fur ^^
------------- Ars longa, vita brevis. |
Posted By: Wyverii
Date Posted: 26 November 2007 at 3:33pm
 Small update. More crit appreciated. |
Posted By: BlackDragon
Date Posted: 26 November 2007 at 3:35pm
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Ah! Too much forward!
Nice lineart btw ------------- "A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie |
Posted By: thedaemon
Date Posted: 26 November 2007 at 5:50pm
| Can't see the rest of his body but he might be off balance. His head is indeed too far forward. If his left arm is stretched out he is probably not off balance. Just not sure with this little of line art. Really nice sharp line art, the image is real clear and detailed all ready. |
Posted By: GeorgiePie
Date Posted: 26 November 2007 at 8:47pm
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When the lineart looks this awesome, you know the result is going to be!
I can't really crit anything at the moment... I might get back to you with that XD
He looks like his left arm will be out, maybe bending/hunching a bit... I assume. We'll see won't we? ------------- |
Posted By: Wyverii
Date Posted: 27 November 2007 at 7:34am
 New update for the bunch of mind readers xD Yes I intended for his other arm to stretch out and it'll be pressed against a rock or perhaps something else if I change my mind. The right arm and hand's are just basic sketches to help me with the placement of the legs, it'll be worked on once the rest of the body's complete. Hands, are very, very annoying. Onto the lower body! Thanks for all the help thus far ^^ |
Posted By: GeorgiePie
Date Posted: 27 November 2007 at 11:00am
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I know it's a sketch, but I have to say thet his right hands thumb isn't placed right/the other fingers are too long.
I really like this WIP! Can't wait to see it once it's done =D ------------- |
Posted By: Wyverii
Date Posted: 01 December 2007 at 8:50am
 Dangit, I didn't get much time to work on this but i've finally got round to finishing off the body. Arm needs to be fixed, fairly happy with the legs. Shading on arms and legs will be next. PS. GeorgiePie, the hands aren't exactly conventional, the thumb is placed higher than it naturally would be on a human because it's a partial mix with how a wolf's paw works. |
Posted By: greenraven
Date Posted: 01 December 2007 at 9:02am
That looks pretty good.  But you're breaking my preconceived notions that all werewolves are howling lunatics out for blood. This one seems... happy.  -------------  "pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso 
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Posted By: Wyverii
Date Posted: 01 December 2007 at 9:21am
| Who says werewolfies have to be angry all the time? ;p This one has an expression of mild interest on his face xD |
Posted By: spartan_117
Date Posted: 01 December 2007 at 9:25am
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greenraven stop stereotyping werewolves like that, they have feelings u know.
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Posted By: GeorgiePie
Date Posted: 01 December 2007 at 10:15am
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Ah, I wondered that! I knew I should have said "Unless..." This is really awesome, I can't wait for some color =D ------------- |
Posted By: Serendor
Date Posted: 02 December 2007 at 4:04am
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The left hand seems to be missing some fingers which seems weird. Also a nice tail would be nice I guess. Otherwise it's nice! //Albin |
Posted By: Elwin
Date Posted: 02 December 2007 at 10:17am
| Yay, looks great ^^ I can't critic anything really ^^; |
Posted By: Wyverii
Date Posted: 02 December 2007 at 1:05pm
 Final lineart unless anybody has any objections. No tail for this werewolf xD Color will come next, i'm going to base the coloring on this patterning: http://www.skolaiimages.com/wildlife/canine/wolves/images/Wolf_a_004.jpg - (Link) which is mostly black with brown highlights. |
Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 02 December 2007 at 1:19pm
| We should be able to see some more of the werewolf's left fingers. Unless they're, y'know, cut off or something. |
Posted By: Wyverii
Date Posted: 02 December 2007 at 1:32pm
| Does anybody actually read through the comments of the artist before posting? He's going to be holding onto a rock in the finished picture so you shouldn't be able to see the fingers behind. |
Posted By: Hatch
Date Posted: 02 December 2007 at 1:46pm
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His head looks slightly off center. ------------- |
Posted By: E-Bomb
Date Posted: 02 December 2007 at 1:54pm
| If he's holding a rock, his hand's in a very weird position. |
Posted By: Wyverii
Date Posted: 02 December 2007 at 2:06pm
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On second thoughts, i'll just reply to Black Dragon's crit- Hey, I can't log onto the forums so I'll post my werewolf crit here: Well, if he is going to lean on a rock, his left arm should be at a 170 degree angle instead of the steep 160 degree angle. That arm should be a little shorter. His right arm could be on his hip, he looks a bit uncomfortable holding it in the air like that. One last thing: his head should be about 4 pixels to the left. Cheers! Feel free to post this for me. Anyway, hand's in the correct position for how I want to lie on the rock, after all his fingers are very stiff compared to humans; I measured the proportions of the arms with my fingers while in 2x zoom and although it might not be pixel perfect it's certainly proportional and it's not going to change and I can't see why I have to change the right arm.Honestly, if I tried to change some of this i'd become unhappy with the piece. I've moved the head left 3/4 pixels. |