My First Line art
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 11:38pm
Topic: My First Line art
Posted By: dcontell
Subject: My First Line art
Date Posted: 14 August 2005 at 6:51pm
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my first lineart to be colored.
Is the oak's lab. of prof.  |
Replies:
Posted By: Moonstrider
Date Posted: 14 August 2005 at 7:05pm
| Looks pretty good. Maybe you could have a bit more details on the windmill thing. And it looks a bit odd, like its out of perspective or something... But things are generally a bit skewed so it may be a style issue too. |
Posted By: SplatPixel
Date Posted: 14 August 2005 at 8:01pm
| bet this is gonna look amazing when you add in some color. i like the perspective on this, very nicely done. |
Posted By: sedgemonkey
Date Posted: 15 August 2005 at 10:10am
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Great style and an interesting warped perspective... this has a lot of potential. The bush size around the walk is the only thing bothering me. The bushes that are closer to us should be larger than the ones further away. |
Posted By: TACW
Date Posted: 15 August 2005 at 12:34pm
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Looks really great. I can't wait to see it colored. ) ------------- http://hometown.aol.com/boomerangproduct/myhomepage/index.html"> 
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Posted By: jujucece
Date Posted: 17 August 2005 at 5:19am
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For a first production, it's very nice... But I don't like the Ctrl+C Ctrl+V for the trees... I want to see it colored ! ------------- Jujucece |
Posted By: dcontell
Date Posted: 17 August 2005 at 7:58pm
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Update:
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Posted By: zi-double
Date Posted: 18 August 2005 at 1:48am
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watch roof ... in back side in lover corner he finish with vertical line and that isn't good for ballance of the picture another what I can understand is two horizontal lines one of the roof and one of the wall in left part of building ... they have very very different direction ? as entity ... very interesting and I hope to see this with colours :) ========================= :) GDGB :) |
Posted By: TACW
Date Posted: 18 August 2005 at 5:01am
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Question, does any picture have to ever look right I mean look at thousands of cartoons and movies out there. Some look like hell and still make crazy money while others that spend alot of time get nothing. Some Artist have their own style.. And this style I like. ;) ------------- http://hometown.aol.com/boomerangproduct/myhomepage/index.html">
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Posted By: zi-double
Date Posted: 18 August 2005 at 7:11am
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just show my idea
I think the roof must be more down after my correction than he will more interesting ... ... and I think for straw roof or something handing on the end of roof :) excuse me for my try dcontell !!! ========================= :) GDGB :) |
