Splash screen for mobile phone game
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 11:53pm
Topic: Splash screen for mobile phone game
Posted By: space2
Subject: Splash screen for mobile phone game
Date Posted: 09 September 2005 at 3:18pm
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Hi! I have to change the splash screen of our upcomming title, and I tought I try it in pixel art style, here is a very-pre-alpha version:  To see the old one check out the game's site: http://p2k.saxoft.com - http://p2k.saxoft.com Any idea/comment/critic is welcome. |
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Posted By: Citizen_Insane
Date Posted: 09 September 2005 at 5:04pm
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hey it's looking alright, so far. Shouldn't the other glove have cut-away fingers, too? Maybe he could use some side burns, too.. or just some more structure to the face, and some muscle definition.. But, yeah, it's looking alright. |
Posted By: EyeCraft
Date Posted: 09 September 2005 at 7:10pm
| Looking good at this point. I'd pay some attention to his ear, it doesn't look right. His hair growing pattern doesn't seem natural either, if you get what I mean. |
Posted By: space2
Date Posted: 09 September 2005 at 10:50pm
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Hi! Thanks for the comments. The other glove will have cutaway fingers as well. And yes, I just saw how starnge is his ears. I will have a LOT of works to do on this one... but at least I enjoy it ;-) Btw, I think I will change the shading a bit, I want most of the guy in dark, with only a few highlights. |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 10 September 2005 at 5:31am
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i think the gun is good but it looks a bit odd, like the angle at which
its pointing makes it look really short.. plus his sight thing is floating. |
Posted By: Fredde
Date Posted: 10 September 2005 at 11:14am
| It look pretty cool, but you might have to fix the ear. |
Posted By: acrylicana
Date Posted: 10 September 2005 at 11:29am
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I'm so enjoying the gun at this point. :D As for his left hand (our right) look at the position of the knuckles in relation to his fingers. The index finger, although the knuckle is out, comes in too far if it's doing that. The forshortening [of the hand] isn't clearly defined. :/ Keep it up, man. |
Posted By: space2
Date Posted: 10 September 2005 at 12:09pm
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... and the bandage, or how they call it, on the head is not nice
enough... I have to redo the shading. Also it should be longer... I have a lot of work to do... and right now I don't have time for it :-( But I promise I keep you updated. I really appreciate all the comments!!! (I might send you the full version of the game when it will be ready ;-) |