Red Line

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Red Line



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Title: Red Line
Pixel Artist: wishuponapixel  (Level 6 Hitman :: 5339 points)
Posted: 12/14/2015 20:13
Palette: 9 colors
Statistics:  8 comments    22 faves    0 avatars

Break from all the school work and other projects I've been doing.

~3hrs

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king_bobston (Level 10 Capo) @ 12/20/2015 04:57

Very beautiful decision on the appliance of the colors and I love the clothing folds! Also the AA and the crisp places without AA make a nice contrast, I'll have to recheck this piece sometime to look closer to that.


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saulc12 (Level 8 Cannibal) @ 12/15/2015 12:05

This is very stylish, me likey very much ;-)


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wishuponapixel (Level 6 Hitman) @ 12/15/2015 09:03

Ah poops, thought I shrunk the head down enough );

Thank you for the rest of the critiques! I'll see what I can impliment and do when I get the time this week.


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Manupix (Level 11 Godzilla) @ 12/15/2015 07:27

Nicely pixeled =)

I see a few issues with anatomy and pose.

Mostly, the arm isn't foreshortened enough and appears very short, in part because of shading (see on the ref how the elbow and forearm are mostly in shadow) and possibly the red stripe (small undulations in the fabric would likely alter its appearance and even visibility on the upper arm).
Her butt probably can't touch the wall with this leg position because the heel length isn't compensated by a higher thigh as in the ref (this doesn't really stand out though).
The head looks too big, and the mouth is weird because seen more in profile than the nearly facing head.

Pixeling nitpicks: the coat could use a bit of AA, and doesn't need the grey outline along the dark border.

Shading nitpick: the dress below the thigh should be in the same denser shadow as the back, would probably help with volume and presence either.


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wishuponapixel (Level 6 Hitman) @ 12/15/2015 06:53

It is positioned that way. Reference


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CritiqueMyWork (Level 8 Rear Admiral) @ 12/15/2015 05:27

Who is this cute pie


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Pix.Ed. (Level 6 SWAT) @ 12/15/2015 04:09

Nice work. The hand looks as if though its backwards though, with the thumb facing out. Thanks for sharing.


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RAV (Level 1 Rookie) @ 12/15/2015 02:40

Ay caramba, chicka chicka boom boom!


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