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It's a little difficult to understand what the animal is. Maybe making it darker or something to make it stand out just a little. Otherwise it looks great to me!
Ah, thank you!
Color had been a part of my focus with this; continues to be, lol.
If I may, does it look unfinished because of some needed detail/transition areas with the grass?
Small edit
Regarding the water, sometimes less can be more. I took one color and just started floodfilling randomly to remove colors, and after a while the result started reading a bit more like water. I think what makes it hard to read as water is that the even a small puddle is basically a mirror, and you'd expect to see a reflection of some sort, generally a reflection of something else in the picture. When it's like that though, it's hard to connect it to being a reflection of anything, making it hard to read as water. "Busy" and colorful water is of course fine, but even in these examples you can see how the reflection helps understanding it as water.
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There are also three things I'm not sure what they are; is that a tree or a far away path? Is that a cliff or a ravine? Is that a shrubbery or something else entirely?
I also didn't quite understand the structure of the creature, I tried to outline it in black but I'm still not sure what's what.