Thank you for your detailed and kind advices.
I reference it next time.
Agreed about the preview.
Why is one of the black branches missing AA in the middle? The grey ones look fine not AAed, but the black one stands out.
The pole looks very bandy. Try giving it a little subtle texture (wood perhaps?) to break up the uniformity and perfection of the bands. Just varying those band widths a little should do it.
I always hesitate to click "Yes" on your works in the queue because of how you draw clouds/skies. They always look so haphazard and uncontrolled compared to the rest of the work.
I'd recommend a more accurate preview. The heavily-cropped you're using gives people no reason to click.
The perspective is really cool. I like it!