Quick edit:
At least tone down the black background, and fix that hair! Something pretty basic can do.
There are also volume/shading issues (mostly in the neck) that I don't know how to fix. Do yourself a favor and open a WIP thread, either here or over at Pixelation (dunno which is most active these days). This piece deserves it, and so do you ;)
Pretty cool, but I sort of agree with chicken. I really think texturing the hair would make this piece go a long way, especially considering you could just use the second and third lightest colour on the face for the hair. Really loving the pixelling in the eye area.
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