Hahahahah yeah exactly what I meant ;P Nah but I'm talking about her shoulders, they look a bit too maskulin.. also her hand is kind of  big for a woman and her jaw line is kind of manly.. and the nose too :D I would like to see her more girly!

I liked the sprite alot, but here she just looks like a male cross dresser =/

hey larwick, did you checka out the thread in the forum? I made some comments all up in there. Dog.

You produce awesome work so naturally ^_^ 5/5!

Dude, you got this one down! I love it, the colors and the overall look of the portrait looks awesome. Great work

this, whilst is quite good, looks as tho its been rushed. maybe take some more timeover it and get it perfect.

Okay, I REALLY don't see how a person can overlook the dark selout and go straight to "omg dithering clash" in this. There is so little dithering, used solely for color conservation I'd imagine, that it doesn't even matter. But that selout is just really killing me here. You're busting my balls, Larwick. Busting my balls.

It's really good but, apart from looking a guy, the only thing I dislike is the dithering. Looks awful since the rest of the piece is flat-shaded...

Larwick made this

GASP :O The nose scares me. looks like a few parts could use some A-A or dithering possibly, but it is quiet awesome :) Alot better than my attempt ;)

without the breasts and hair, I'd say it looks like a dude. It's really good. I'm just saying she doesn't look like a lady

<3 same goes for this piece too ;)