It seems like you spent more time on the fiddly details than the overall layout. Each element appears to be done separately, giving the piece a very disjointed feel. The left side is much heavier than the right side. Since everything has an equal attention to detail, I am confused about the focus. There is a slight single-point perspective on the lettering, but since the tree and flower (right of the text) don't share this, it ends up looking skewed.
Jävligt het, as you say in Sweden. And that ball must be one of the best shaded balls I've seen. keep it up...
For 11 colours, this is some pretty sleak work. Very shiney