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This is a strange idea, but I am glad that it exists. I do have some critique though!
There's a sky-colour line that appears on the right edge for a frame. Some non-shadowed pixels appear right next to the surfboard in some frames. I think these things are worth fixing, they make the piece feel unfinished.
What are the short vertical-ish lines on the pizza-wave intended to be? I can't tell, but they're distracting.
Lastly, and this one's mostly a matter of taste: the shadow and outline colours on the dog are very similar, to the point that at first I thought you jad jagginess on the back leg. I hink it might look better if you replaced the shadow colour with the outline colour. You'd lose the detail on the shadowed hind leg, but it's not important detail.
I will forever love pizza dog!