The animation itself is absolutely lovely, but the dragon itself is so messy I could barely tell what it was without reading the title. I think the issue is that the white appears in every frame of the animation, so it doesn't stand out as the highlight anymore (because it exists regardless), and just serves to be an additional color that overbears the rest of the piece.
My best feedback would be to really tone down on the white usage, and try making a cleaner scale texture. The animation/transition itself is gorgeous, though.
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The animation itself is absolutely lovely, but the dragon itself is so messy I could barely tell what it was without reading the title. I think the issue is that the white appears in every frame of the animation, so it doesn't stand out as the highlight anymore (because it exists regardless), and just serves to be an additional color that overbears the rest of the piece.
My best feedback would be to really tone down on the white usage, and try making a cleaner scale texture. The animation/transition itself is gorgeous, though.