Nice composition. I suggest dropping the dithering of the skin, it gives a probably unwanted texture to it. Another option is to indrease the dithered areas to form a separate cluster.
There are some minor banding isuues as well.
Thanks for the feedback! And yeah, I struggled with that little carpet bit. Trying to figure out how that spot should be lit with the open door + the perspective was awkward to say the least. Once I figure out a better option I may adjust the image.
great! love the palette, shapes, perspective, very very nice. There's something lightly akward with the rug red spot around the knee that grind my gears, but anyway i love it!
Awesome perspective & atmosphere.