I can't pinpoint anything to critique about. Maybe someone more experienced than me can find something. What I can do is mention some fine points for this piece though.

The attention to details is . Things such as the ageing skin of the women, shown with the subtle wrinkles and moles. The folds of the clothes are quite believable in their apperance(side note: unless the captain's jacket is tailored to the woman's form, I don't get its design. Hard to breath when closed too. But that's being picky...).

Body and facial exressions are on point. You've done a fine job in giving the characters life.

Thanks for sharing your hard work. An animated version would be wunderbar.