Thanks for the feedback! I defiantly woulden't of guessed the grey blending in with the transparency. Hmm I need to start getting the hang of AA. Yeah I would recommend it if you into anime or mystery, I kind of want to draw most the characters, the character design is so good on that show.

Hmm, I think that this piece will benefit from anti-aliasing. I say this because it's fairly readable but not smooth.

There are some other things I would like to point out. I would suggest that a different background be used, the grey in your palette blends with the transparancy. And the white for the eyes are too bright, they look like they're glowing.

I hope this advice is of use. I'm going to check out Danganronpa.