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Thank for the comment mioscene 
. I will give the outline a review at some point, but I think I need a a bit more practice first. I will revisit once my skills have improved.
I saw your progress on the WIP board, and it's a great result! 
I agree with Voltali that the outline has a few patches which look a little rough. I don't think it needs a full black outline, but perhaps using the darkest visor shades to shade the outlines might work better overall?
Thank you for the crit . I'll have to revert my theme to see what you are saying. The outline is supposed to work on *most* backgrounds, but maybe I'll just stick to full black outlines next time.
I will fix the visor in a moment!
Not familiar with the character aside from googling it, but speaking from a technical aspect, you've done a nice job rendering his shiny look!
There are some parts of the outline that don't really work with PJ default background though. Also, the eye visor slit could use a bit more AA on the darkest outside pixels, so to be on par with the rest :)
Imposing pose