yeah it's a lot more readable in game.. here's it in game with some of my other art it's for my friends project ;D

I love the gusty little movement lines

I thought it was a long-haired man until I read the title. Maybe it's the way she carries herself--and I read the breasts as her left shoulder.

I don't know how I would change it, and it looks more readable at greater magnification than default. I love the walk animation. It has a lot of class.