updated and fixed text and colors

I like these colors, Its nice that the hat and face are almost the same shade/hue.

Thanks! Yeah I know it, just tried to use ligher colors instead of whose.

Lain best loli. 
Very neat pixel art. : ) 
Maybe a little pale tho.

Lain is love, Lain is life. Perhaps if the background was a bit darker it would make her sillhouete more distinct (also, I remember the Lain promotional posters being quite dark). Good job, nonetheless.