All the parts of the image look great - it's just a case of unifying them in one whole :) Keep up the good work!
Thanx for youre comment.....sometimes you looose, as i may have done int this pic.....i keep on struggling for better art all the time...iits fun, creating something....
Woah, 63 is a ton of colours! Your lighting is good, but I feel that the perspective is a bit off. Some of the items are in isometric while others are flat or from a higher perspective.
Really like your subject matter!
Nice scene I am digging the composition.
I am seeing some problems with the shading and perspective.
The book and the knife look flat. And the box at the right bottom looks out of perspective.