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The colouring looks very flat. There's a rimlight on one side, and a rim-shadow on the other - this makes her look like am embossed sticker, rather than like a 3D person. Decide where your light source is, and add shadows to those parts where the light doesn't reach directly. Remember that you're depicting a 3D object.
She looks like she has one leh since the other leg is behind the visible one. I think the pose might read better if you moved one of the legs so that both are visible, something like this or this.
Thx for the comment. I will change my pixel art.
Thx for the help :)