you should add the link to your song !! this one is soooo good!! (x the art is really stunning (the colors are WOW) and the song i just keep listening to heh~
Thanks so much for really taking the time to give feedback!
this is a pretty old drawing haha - but I still appreciate the critque because it still adds to my knowledge of does and donts.
Thanks again!
Ok, as you wish :)
Main issues for me:
- there is no real difference between background and portrait - alltogether it looks flat (I know how hard is add space to picture with only 14 colors, but still) - everthing on the same lvl of contrast, intensity, importance (in gfx meaning)
- style and anathomy - while hand and sword try to looks 3d and semirealistic - face is treated very comic (manga) and unrealistic way - it causes incoherence. especially with this rich detail shading style
- this blue thing on head - I don't get it - seriously, looks like dead bird to me :)
- last thing, composition - too centered for sure, I would say even - too heavy on right side. With portraits I believe is better to leave some air on side where person stare. Or give 'heavy' element on left side to make it better balanced.
Thank you for your compliments and subtle critiques! I plan on making more drawings like these in the future - so I welcome all criticism - you can share your criticism as i will greatly appreciate it for future reference!
interesting - very carefully done on pixel side (although I thing dither is overused) many elements nice to look at.
- on drawing/composition side, there are more issues...
Anyway - good work
Thank all of you guys - I feel this is one of my best pieces :)
What a wonderfull, a magnificent feast of colours and shades! Spectaculous!
I really love the colors on this one, it's so beautiful.