This is surely the blotchiest and flattest shading ever.

Hmm.. broken image :-/ won't show up

Yes, "they have". I find it quite "unattractive" for someone to recieve such an ill mannered response from individuals whom he had hoped would provide with kind criticism. I have no problem with insightful opinion from those whom i ask for advice, however what irks me is your use of words. Forgive me if i misunderstood but i felt your comments to be condescending in nature. Instead of saying that the shading is "blotchy", could you perhaps providse me with advice on how to improve on it? I agree with your criticism of the perspective, and i'll try my hardest, but perhaps you could be more delicate in your presentation of such advice.

I hope you are able to understand my use of language-it would pain me to have to type another paragraph.

P.s> I would still appreciate, clear, concise, and constuctive criticism.

The shading looks blotchy and flat on the body. And, I don't think "They want this style" is an excuse for not having a neck. The way it looks is that it's more of a birds eye view on the head, but the rest of the body is up front. It's rather unattractive. Have "they" seen it?

Looks good to me.

Thanks, but character design isn't my main issue (they want this style so thats what i'll do)

Are there any comments regarding palette choice, shading etc?

I'd prefer it if there was a neck.

The chin bothers me. I'm not sure what it is...

perspective issues? =(

I think its goooood