I really don't think the shadow of the nose shows any continuity with the shadow of the hair/neck etc. Also, her cheek outline is so jagged; the difference in colour between the skin's outline and the hair is so little that you might as well not have an outline there at all. Either that or it should more darker/more noticeable. In any case, some anti-aliasing there would get rid of that jaggedyness.
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